Trial of Socrates comic - Socrates and I need your input again...

POLIS: The Trial of Socrates

Almost two weeks ago, I made a post here asking for help in choosing an artist for my upcoming historical graphic novel. Down to the top four applicants, the response from the Steemit community was nearly unanimous. I agreed with your choice, though I had some waffling hesitation. While I don't doubt the artist's talent, part of me wondered if, down the road, I might think the grass could have been somewhat greener with a different choice.

I told Gian he was the perfect fit and I wanted to work with him. I paid to get started on some character sketches, and he sent some back, though they are not yet finished. (His speed is totally fine. I am not in a big rush.)

Gian_chars.jpg

I informed the other artists that I had decided to go with someone else. One of these, Daniel Becker, asked if he could flesh out some characters and pages as a test-run, for free. If I liked what he did, we'd move forward. If not, no big deal.

Well, I figured why not?

First he sent some character sketches:

Socrates.jpg

CRITIAS_Sketch.jpg

What I liked about these was Daniel's attempt to show these characters - not just what they look like, but what they look like in a range of emotions. Pretty cool!

Then he sent me several rough sketches for pages. Totally rough - and yet, I could easily visualize what's going on, and it looked pretty awesome. This one is a spread:

Socrates_014-015.jpg

A couple days later, he sends me this nearly finished draft:

Socrates_014-015_v3.jpg

I've gotta say, I'm pretty blown away. (For any history buffs out there, this is a scene from Xenophon's Hellenica where Theramenes accuses Critias of improprieties... and Critias has him arrested.)

Maybe it's unfair to ask you to make a comparison between these two artists, since Daniel has gotten a lot further into the development than Gian. But talk to me! Should I go with Daniel instead? Or am I being blinded by something?

Here's the script page in case you want to see what he was working off of:

ScriptSample.jpg

Thanks for your support and any feedback! I hope you'll stick around and watch it all come together.


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