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Christmas Present
Thirty Christmases rescheduling freedom. “Glioblastoma, stage 4…” and “Merry Christmas,” in identical envelopes, one containing 10,000 bucks. The other, today’s news. She clings to her old dream, determined to get it on that plane. Eyes closed, deep breath, rainbow-colored snowflakes. Time to go see real snow. “Two months will do.”
Regalo de Navidad
Treinta navidades reprogramando la libertad. “Glioblastoma, grado 4…” y “Feliz Navidad”, en sobres idénticos, uno con 10.000 dólares. El otro con la noticia de hoy. Ella se aferra a un viejo sueño, decidida a subirlo en ese avión. Ojos cerrados, respiro profundo, copos de nieve multicolores. Tiempo de ir a ver nieve de verdad. “Con dos meses me alcanza”.
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About Jayna's 50-Word Challenge
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About the Making of This 50-Word Story
Cumaná is a hot city. You would not believe it. Everyday a regular citizen must walk miles to the nearest bus stop—and beg for one to appear (instead of a truck for chickens or cattle)—or go straight to work under severe burning sunlight like fire. “You walk no matter what because you fear to get stuck,” my friend used to say; she lost the battle to cancer and to this government.
In this city, you feel your skull in flames, your thighs under your jeans sweat and burn, too. The soles of your cheap shoes feel thin; the heat stings your nerves; your feet blister. The beach is near; we make up the coast, practically; so there’s saline breeze now and then. Oily faces shine alive, while saltpeter wastes you away.
In this city, your dreams get stuck. Some people decide to get those dreams on a plane. Some of them understand it too late.
Thanks for reading.
Posted from my blog with SteemPress : https://marlyncabrera.timeets.com/2018/12/01/christmas-present-a-fifty-word-story-for-jayna/
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