[Fiftywords] With Her Flying Broom

Hi again to another one of my fifty word stories. This weekly challenge currently being maintained by the awesome @jayna and the prompt this week is "Witch."

While I never liked the historical witches, I love the fictional ones so my feelings toward the term is a mixed bag. Out of all witches however, the titular character of "Kiki's delivery service" is my favorite. I loved that movie and how it put the witches in modernized peaceful world. I want to write a story in a world like that.

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With Her Flying Broom

She traded her red dress for a black coat.
She bid her parents good-bye as her broom twitched.
Ready to fly.

She glanced at her home again, burning the scenery in her memory.
She'd follow the ancient ritual, finding a territory to call her own.

The new witch took off.

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So, how was it?

I wanted this story to feel mysterious yet lets you feel at home. It's hard to do when you have only 50 words. Most of my other #fiftywords had "The End" or something after the last word, but I didn't find it a good way to end this story, it's her beginning.

So, what are your thoughts?
Please tell me in comments.

Cover image is made using this image from unsplash.

If there are some parts that feel unnatural in English or I could write better, please tell me about that too. You'll get upvote.