Hello my fellow readers! My name is @elbrujo, also known as 'Segovia', coming back to present to you my second submission to the weekly Fifty Words Challenge, hosted by @jayna. The last week was my debut on the contest and I surprisingly made it to the highlights; I still can't believe it, me, an amateur and first timer. I didn't thought my story was good, I'm still learning to write stories but, I'm thankful to all the people that read that one and enjoyed it and, I hope you also enjoy this one (Sorry in advance if it is too bad). This week, the prompt word for the challenge is: forgive.
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Behind a tinted windshield, Jacob sat in front of the steering wheel, for a whole hour. He was waiting for her.
In his right hand, he held his old pistol.
She finally left her home.
“I will never forgive you” He muttered to himself, and got out of the car.
Background.
There isn't a huge background for this story in particular. I based this on an old relationship that didn't work out, and it left me broken and unable to develop feelings for anyone else for a good amount of time. I'm young but, I think love at this age can be remarkably volatile and passionate. This story reflects the feeling of not wanting to see your significant other with anyone else, feelings of betrayal, and obsession. I didn't feel this way however, but I took the emotion further in this 50 words of fiction.
I hope you guys enjoy my story. Getting feedback would be deeply appreciated. Thanks, and please, if you could support me with an upvote or resteem, that would be great as well! 