Essence of This Afternoon | 5 Minute Freewrite, Day 111

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Renoir, Picking Flowers

Barely can I put words
to the essence​ of
this afternoon

She strolled through her
mother's garden, wistfully
stopping often

To smell the flowers,
brush the grass with
her palm

I came to her quietly
humbly in the
hot sun

"Ma'am, may I join you?"
Bashful, hopeful, hopeless
"Yes, Tom"

We walked in silence,
her short stride slowing us
to a hum

Bees buzzed, sweat dripped
Flowers sang a
gentle hymn​

Bold as ever, though not
by confidence if
only on a whim

"Would you tell me
the story of this flower,
if I sit."

Nod, smile, and she
plucks a bud, for us
And begins.


While I did not include the word dream in today's freewrite, the theme inspired my choice in an impressionist painting to be the visual illustration of my poetic story. Impressionism's thick, noticeable​ brush strokes, muddled colors and muted tones evoke a dreamy perspective of subject-matter.

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Hi, I'm Amelia! It's nice to meet you.

I'm a writer, minimalist, tiny home dweller, and maker living in East Tennessee, USA. My blog has lived at www.amelia-bartlett.com until I discovered Steemit, where I now post most of my work. To learn more about me, check out my introduction post, get up-to-date on my school bus tiny house conversion, and follow me for articles on slow living, sustainable fashion, self-expression, and quality curated resteems!

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