Instructions - a stream of consciousness poem for Freewrite # 187: nail

Greetings fellow Steemians! Here is my 47th 5 minute freewrite. (Disclaimer: these usually take me more than 5 minutes to write). The prompt is "nail". Many thanks to @mariannewest for hosting this daily freewrite!
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Instructions


If heartlessness is strength
Then you win the prize
Because none of us
Can
Not feel it
The way you can
So when you take man
(1)
And place him on cross
(2)
Inserting nail (E)
Into palm (F)
Nail (G)
Into palm (H)
And Nail (I)
Into feet (J)
After first making sure
To fit crown of thorns (A)
Snugly into place on head (B)
And after also
(Carefully)
Slicing open side (C)
With spear (D)
We look at what you've made and think:
This is the symbol we've been waiting for.
This
Is love.


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