Day 125: 5 Minute Freewrite: Wednesday - Prompt: cinnamon - Broken Part 4 - A continuation of Lola's story

Lola's fingertips caressed the picture frames along the hall as she tiptoed quietly down the hall of her parents house. Smiling faces stared back at her.

She had decided to accept her parents invitation to move into their home. Her resistance had waned once they had placed a bowl of warm chicken noodle soup in front of her. The floodgates of hunger had opened, and she was hungry, so hungry.

Although she knew she should feel grateful, she knew she needed to...feel...anything for them, the only thing she could feel was that this wasn't her home. It wasn't even the place she had grown up. Her parents had grown and moved on. But what she wouldn't give in this moment to walk outside and sit below the maple tree Kyle had proposed under...or the front porch where he had kissed her for the first time. She caressed her belly, and thought back on the last three nights of broken sleep on scratchy sheets and a stiff matress that belonged to the guest bedroom

The only thing that felt like home were the sounds of her little brother in the room next door. But even that was foriegn, it had been five years since they last shared a roof.

She passed his room now, and heard him feeding his pet snake, and continued towards the kitchen. The smell of cinnamon rolls wafted through the air. Her mom was baking, and for a fleeting moment she felt joy.

Hey guys! Thanks for reading, and spending some time with me! I'm really enjoying Lola's story, and if you would like to read the other parts to get a fuller picture, I've linked them below!

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

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With much love,
Stacie D

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