Steemit OpenMic Songwriter's Challenge Week 7 - "Right Place Right Time" - [Original Song Demo]

Here's my dual submission for Open Mic & Songwriter's Challenge. The theme was "Right Place/Right Time." This one seemed easy enough & in that, I really tried to break away from my usual guitar style on this one.

I adopted a quasi-reggae (or even dance music groove), which I don't normally use. At first it came out more as a country vibe. Of course there is also a bunch of classic jaybird stuff in there as well.

As per usual, by no means is this a perfect performance, I screw up a bit, some lyrics/melody and play a wrong chord here and there haha oh but the worst part was....My Guitar being all wonky and needing a set up! It can no longer stay in tune right now!!! Sooooo Frustrating! Once I put the capo on...oh lord.

Hope you enjoy anyway!



Right Place Right Time – Jay Sussman - Jan 4 2018

V:It’s always been on my mind since we first moved
When I left it all behind just to be with you
Still it caught me by surprised when we fell through
Just wanted you

You say it’s only a matter of time till
I finally begin to forgive you
That I just can’t leave us behind cause it’s too soon
It’s still too soon

P:Oh I better leave before it kills me
Get in that car and just drive
We may not be in the right place
This may not be the right time

C:To say goodbye x3

V:Even though so much time has past
I know that you and I will always have
This push and pull that I can never break
Wish I could break

B:We may not be in the right place
This may not be the right time
But maybe if I leave this place
I can get u out of my mind
And say goodbye

And say goodbye x3


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