This is my unofficial entry to Steemit Open Mic Week 89.
Just wrote a freshly-squeezed song and recorded it as raw as possible in one take on my cell so I don't forget it. Didn't try to polish it at all because I thought I would continue to work on it over time and perhaps record it once its finished this way I can make a post later that would show the process of creating, honing, and producing a song. Please forgive the mistakes and thanks for listening.
Songs are like children. They start out as babies and grow over time. Unless you're a songwriter it's hard to understand that. Most people hear a song once it's completely finished and never hear it in its infancy.
I have a friend who wrote and produced a song performed by Sheryl Crow called Leaving Las Vegas. You may have heard it as it was a big hit. But if you heard what it sounded like when he wrote it you would have never known it could be such a popular song. It sounded like a redneck Bob Dylan sang it with a pinch of tobacco in his mouth. About as shit-kicking, hillbilly as you could get.
That song sat on a shelf until he pulled it out while producing her first album, Tuesday Night Music Club and the rest is history. There were quite a few songs on that album with interesting backstories that perhaps I'll share with you one day.
Anyway, I thought I would make this crude first draft and continue to work and polish the song. I think it will make a good post for musicians to see the process from start to finish. It really is an art.
Hope you enjoy this version for what it is, raw.
Try Again
Verse: Dm / B7 flat / Dm / B7 flat / G7 / B7 flat / F / C / G / B flat
Chorus: F/ C / G / B flat/ C/ F/ C / G / Gm / B flat/ C
Eagle soaring in the sky
how'd you learn to fly like that?
Did it come naturally?
Do you think that you could teach me?
Where'd you get the nerve to jump
or did somebody push you?
Maybe just a little shove is
all I need to get me going.
Little ant with giant hopes
never doubted for a day
you could move the rubber tree
ten times more than you weigh.
Always looking down on you.
Lessons you could teach me.
Could I borrow half your faith?
It's all I need to know I can.
Jump into the arms of the universe.
Hope it's going to catch me.
If I fall and hit the dirt
how bad you think it's going to hurt?
Pick me up and dust me off,
get back up and try again.
Spider spinning out a web
praying on another meal.
Wind come blow it all away
I know just how you feel.
Test your virtuosity.
Talk about tenacity.
Build yourself another one
better than before
and if the wind should come again
you can always take up flying.
Jump into the arms of the universe.
Hope it's going to catch me.
If I fall and hit the dirt
how bad you think it's going to hurt?
Pick me up and dust me off,
get back up and try again.
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Verse: Dm / B7 flat / Dm / B7 flat / G7 / B7 flat / F / C / G / B flat
Chorus: F/ C / G / B flat/ C/ F/ C / G / Gm / B flat/ C
Eagle soaring in the sky
how'd you learn to fly like that?
Did it come naturally?
Do you think that you could teach me?
Where'd you get the nerve to jump
or did somebody push you?
Maybe just a little shove is
all I need to get me going.
Little ant with giant hopes
never doubted for a day
you could move the rubber tree
ten times more than you weigh.
Always looking down on you.
Lessons you could teach me.
Could I borrow half your faith?
It's all I need to know I can.
Jump into the arms of the universe.
Hope it's going to catch me.
If I fall and hit the dirt
how bad you think it's going to hurt?
Pick me up and dust me off,
get back up and try again.
Spider spinning out a web
praying on another meal.
Wind come blow it all away
I know just how you feel.
Test your virtuosity.
Talk about tenacity.
Build yourself another one
better than before
and if the wind should come again
you can always take up flying.
Jump into the arms of the universe.
Hope it's going to catch me.
If I fall and hit the dirt
how bad you think it's going to hurt?
Pick me up and dust me off,
get back up and try again.
If you would like to enter Steemit Open Mic read the rules and enter here
Steemit Open Mic Week 89 Record Your Performance And Win Steem Sponsored By Pfunk And Luzcypher --- by @luzcypher
Listen to Open Mic Musicians Playing Live on Sounds of Steem Live
Sounds Of Steem Live Music Concert Vol 5 Msp Waves Radio Show Recording --- by @isaria
Chat With Musicians On The Open Mic Discord Channel