Steemit Openmic Songwriters Challenge-Week 3-Stolen Souls

When I first saw the theme of Stolen Souls, I did my usual "what the hell am I going to do with that?" routine. Then 30 minutes later I somehow had two verses written down.
I had an idea for the song musically that I had found in the days since uploading my last song but couldn't make it fit. Were those verses or choruses I had written? Blocked, I was going to stop for the day in hopes of figuring something out tomorrow (Thursday), and as soon as I stepped away I heard the chorus in my head and that was it...

Sometimes it takes a while after a song is written for me to really get what it is about. This one I have a clear vision right way. I did write something about it, but instead of posting it I think it is better to let the listener take from it what they will.

Peace

Stolen Souls

Look at you now
Baby what have you done
Trying to sound
Like you and I are one
You bring me down
With every chord you strum

You'll never get it

Can't steal my soul
Cause I don't have it
I don't really know
Just how it happens
And the piece that shows
Is not what matters anyway
In the end we're all the same

You took my song
But that was all you got
You played me wrong
And made the music stop
You want it all
Here's something you forgot

You'll never get it

Chorus

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