Steemit Openmic Songwriters Challenge-Week2-You're the Sun

Well I managed to tweak my back and lose my voice at the same time...I know, excuses,excuses...
Anyway I didn't want to miss this week so here is the best I could do for a performance. Wish it was better but hopefully you get an idea of what I was shooting for in terms of the song itself...just one rushed take this time instead of 500 !

We are only seeking
When we're lost
Never really thinking
Of the cost
But stars can still be teaching
When they're crossed
Trying but not reaching
To the ground
There's no light above you
When you've found
Everybody loves you
You're the Sun

I could be your planet
If you like
Circling and dancing
As you shine
Caught within your magic
I would find
Nothing more romantic
All around
Everywhere you listen
Is the sound
There is nothing missing
When you've found

You're the Sun
No one is above you
Everybody loves you

Peace

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