Poetry Slam Challenge 7 : The Light at the Edge of the World

Yesterday I posted this image trying to tell everybody that it is pure poetry and that I'd be unable to make it any better by adding words to it.

Then @prufarchy commented and told me that

art is so fluid and unknowable

and that he would love to see what my mind

would conjure up in response to this kind of surreal picture

So I told him that I would overthink my decision and I finally gave it a try:

I'm still unsure if these words add something to the picture, that is not already there.

What do you you think?

Thanks for watching, @shortcut