There's always a next time - Part 2

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Fifteen minutes earlier from Ahmed's first meeting with the little intruder he found in his room, he and his friends were gathering in front of samir's home planning for tomorrow's football match against the neighbours. When the storm suddenly got serious, each one ran back home.

When ahmed was about to enter the house, he put his headphone. It's a technique that helps him ignore his paret's questions. But this time they were yelling at each other so hight that he could hear them clearly. He couldn't ignore some specific words like his own name. His behaviour was involved in the fight. Everyone of his parents was blaming the other for the "unwell raised child". That line just got stuck in his mind. So I am an anwell raise child, he thought. I'll show you what unwell raised children do.

Ahmed entered his room really pissed off. There he found a good surprice waiting for him, someting to throw all his anger on. The poor little cat was so fool to think that the smile on Ahmed's face was a good sign. He knew that children can be very mean, but it was rather a fifty fifty chance that he could get lucky. What happened next was a violant scene where the cat was the victim. He somehow managed to injure Ahmed's hand and run away through the window. But that was after he got so many broken bones and very serious wounds. Those wounds made him forget cold and hunger for a while then they even made him forget where he is and loose all his senses.

In the next afternoon Ahmed was at school in the english lesson, and he had to get the permission from his teacher to go home early, he had an important football match to prepare for, but the teacher wouldn't allow him unless he finishes the ongoing task. The task was about "to describe an animal", since the image of that cat have never left his mind, he wrote his description in no time and he was the first student to read his text:
" One day I found a small white cat in my room. His eyes were big and blue. His legs were perfectly clean and they had black spots that looked like he was wearing some kind of shoes. He was so wet and cold because of the rain outside that I could see his body shaking. I would have fed him but my parents wouldn't allow it so I had to take him outside and I still feel very sorry for him. I hope he is fine somewhere out there."
And that's how he got the permission to go out.

Everyone in the classroom was very surprised. Ahmed never wrote something like this before. He used to write two or three short sentences just to get over with it. But Lynda, the cutest and the smartest girl in class, was surprised for another reason. She met that cat last night and she tried to describe him but she couldn't because all she could remember was the wounds and the voices he made out of pain. So she had to discribe another random animal. But Ahmed, with his hidden writing talent and with their "commun friend", got her attetion that day. In that moment, she didn't know why, but she decided she has to talk to him. He was a puzzle she has to solve and, as a smart girl, she never leaves a puzzle unsolved.




Since I'm still writing it, I'll be open to any suggestions or requests from the readers to make it a fun experience for everybody. Of course I have my own ideas about the big events so I'll be the one who decides how the story goes but I'll do my best not to be too dictator :D

Part 3 will be out next wednesday.

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