[Fiftywords] Melted Away... (Micro Fiction)

So here's my return to @Jayna's #fiftyword contest. The weeks
promot is Chocolate I already wrote a fiftyword about chocolate before, so the next thing that comes to mind in summer? Melting... So this is my theme in this story!

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Melted Away...

"Too hot outside..."

The message left on the table I woke up next to, mocked the coldness around. The paper smelled like the chocolate I found, frozen in melted state.

I searched for clues.
"How I got here?"

Only the door left. Moments later, I melted away, filled with regret.

- Game Over -

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The story is a little too grim this time but I felt it was awesome!

The original script was 69 words long so I had to cut many words and rephrase so much to fit into the 50 words limit.

Because I don't like bad endings wrote "game over" instead of "the end." Maybe the man might get a good ending in the next try, (or woman not sure if I had any indication in the story.)

I also made the door blue on purpose to give you a chilly feel before you start reading... Did that work?

I hope you enjoyed reading this, please tell me your thoughts in comments

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Cover image is made using "Photo by Piotr Hamryszczak on Unsplash."