It Is Time For The Freewrite To End XI (The Black Car)

The Riviera Hounds were unsuccessful in their attempt to kill the freewrite community, in Dubai. The group had already left the house after a tip off.

Mr White has just found out who it is. Mrs Black had discovered something too. In the aftermath, everyone is off to the English Riviera, immediately.

This includes Chief Detective Inspector Pulp. Why are they all rushing back? Eventually the Hounds make it back to their house.

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Episode 11: The Black Car

“Did you manage to get hold of Mrs Sky?” asks Mr White.

“Yes,” Mr Brown replied. “She’ll be here within the next hour.”

“Good, get the radio ready please.”

It is an hour later and Mrs Sky has not shown up at the house.

“Relax, she will be here.”

Mrs Sky has not made it to the house yet. That is because she intended to meet Detective Chief Inspector Pulp beforehand. She had already rang him to arrange a meeting.

Mrs Sky is waiting by the clock tower near the the harbour. A black car pulls up and a back door opens. I would like to tell you the model of the car, but they haven’t paid me yet.

“Please, come in.”

Mrs Sky gets in the car and it drives off.

Another car arrives a few seconds later. It is Pulp. He has missed her. However, he can see the black car that Mrs Sky has jumped into. He does not want to lose her.

He chases the car all around Torquay. This car chase lasts for over 10 minutes. It is difficult to keep chase on these roads. Eventually, he loses sight of the car and Mrs Sky.

The black car has escaped. It finds its way to an industrial estate. There is an empty warehouse.

“We lost him, let's stop here.”

In the black car with Mrs Sky are four woman dressed in black suits. She is sitting between two of them in the back seat.

“Who are you?” asks Mrs Sky.

The driver turns her head. “Who are you? I think that is the question Mrs Sky, or should I call you Miss Rose.”

“Mrs Black!”

“Congratulations, Miss Rose. You did a great job. If it wasn’t for you, the freewrite group would have been destroyed. Saving your life is the least we could do.”

“Saving my life?” questions Miss Rose. “Pulp told me not to trust you.”

“Pulp was the one who informed Mr White of the whereabouts of the group. He was the only person who knew where they were hiding. He would have taken you to the Hounds.”

“What do we do now?” asks Miss Rose.

“We shall…….”

They look out the window of the car. It is surrounded by Mr White, Mr Black, Mr Grey, Mr Green and Mr Brown. The Riviera Hounds. All with guns, pointing at the car.

“Don’t worry,” says Mrs Black. “We’ve got this taken care of.”

To be continued

Episode 12 is ready
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Miss Rose is played by @wandrnrose7

Pictures copyright free images from Pixabay

If you would like to catch up on the whole story, here is a link to Part 1-7 Omnibus Edition. You can then follow the links after each episode.
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