Wild West - Chapter 9 - Part 6 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

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Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3
Chapter 4

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Chapter 5

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Chapter 6

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Chapter 7

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Chapter 8

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10

Chapter 9

1, 2, 3, 4, 5

Part 6


Soon the story from the day before repeated itself. Some workers sat down and waited for the wheelbarrows to get filled up, others tried to catch a quick nap, still third striking a conversation – usually with themselves. Tom and James, however, were both too focused on their next move to be able to relax.

They were both thinking of all possible scenarios that could happen when they reached the train, the possible explanations of the ore and its uses, what the rest of the people under the dome were doing, … They didn’t even notice the wheelbarrows were heaping full until the moving of other men brought them out of their daydreaming.

The wheelbarrow was heavier than they anticipated for it to be. Just lifting it off the ground and pushing it on level ground was hard work, yet they had a giant hill waiting for them not even a minute away.

Traveling through the twisted pathways toward the edge of the mine, they could already feel their arms becoming sore and their back starting to hurt. The moment they started going uphill, the pain in the legs kicked in too, and they were soon sweating like pigs and dying of pain.


Disclaimer: The full story is in its unfinished state. All content is tentative to change.

Link to part 7


The prompt was:

"Travel"


While you are waiting for content new,
in the comments below leave me a clue,
an idea for a story you'd love to read,
a journey to the unknown my keyboard will lead.


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If you enjoy writing yourself, I am hosting a constrained writing contest, where each week I limit your writing with various rules and force you to be creative in brand new ways! If you're not a writer yourself, check it out and see what others have come up with! :D


I turn your writing prompts into stories.

Previous writing prompts I have fulfilled:

Brutal
Funny/Misc
Happy ending
Gross
#1 - Living off the grid
#3 - A young thief
#8 - A traitor from hell
#9 - Not alone
#10 - Millitary testing grounds
#13 - Bigfoot
#14 - And angel in love with a whore
#15 - Down the rabbit hole
#18 - Reborn as a 10 year old
#19 - A struggling door to door salesman
#24 - Rebellious talking food
#26 - Ssssnails!
#28 - Mission Erased
#32 - Dog's breath
#38 - Abducted
#42 - Killer clowns
#43 - A penny
#44 - Fear
#2 - A dolphin tea party
#4 - Stained hands
#7 - The giant depressed onion
#21 - The red star
#25 - Long-distance Relationship
#27 - A dream
#30 - Potato
#31 - Dragons
#33 - The Jungle
#35 - A life lesson
#36 - Unicorn meat
#39 - The Purple Road
#40 - Immortal Store Clerk
#41 - Artemis' Hell
#46 - A scientist's journal
#47 - One of many
#48 - Gone in 10

#5 - The homeless man
#6 - A blind date
#11 - The wealthy man
#12 - Happy ending
#16 - Asshole soulmate
#17 - My bunny Fluffy
#20 - War veteran
#22 - Wishing to meet a villain
#23 - School trip
#45 - Crafted armor









#29 - Green Chewing Gum
#34 - Turkey Trauma
#37 - Stuck in a loop


















Next writing prompt to be fulfilled:

There are currently no writing prompt for me to fulfill.
Post your idea in the comments below to have it turned into a story!

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Five minute freewrite challenges I have fulfilled:

Fire, Toilet, Flash, Soft feet, Pillow, Grounding, Surprise, Ending the pain, Going for a walk, Car Mechanic, Murderer, Dog hair, Ducks, Untested medicine, Forbidden love, Vacation, Awakening, Dentist, Wild west.


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